BEFORE                                                    AFTER

I felt successful with both of these retouches. The biggest difference in both the pictures is how the skin looks smoother and has less blemishes. I also brightened up the eyes and lips to make them "pop" more. If I were to redo the second piece, I would try to add more color to her skin, and more brightness to her eyes, and with the first piece just add more brightness to her eyes. Also on the first piece I would change a little bit of her hairline to make it more on point and not so "loose".